Creative Writing at Year 11

For many Year 11 students the first English standard they attempt is AS 90052-Creative Writing.

This achievement standard requires drafting, re-working, and presenting writing that expresses imaginative and creative ideas, is organised using an appropriate format and structure, and uses acceptable spelling, punctuation, and grammar. It is that last part that often is difficult for students.

You may find this link helpful as it will show you how to include more and better description in your writing.