One for 101

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The next exam summary post is for English 101.

The exam is three hours long. You will sit five papers, details below:

Formal Writing (1.2) AS 90053 – you need to spend 40 minutes writing this paper and write at least 250 words. There are 10 topics. The topics have been chosen to reflect topical issues that teenagers would have opinions on.

Extended Texts (1.3) AS 90054 – you need to spend 30 minutes to complete this paper and write at least 250 words. Every one of you will be writing about a novel. Students in 101 either read The Lord of the Flies or they read Letters from the Inside.

Short Texts (1.4) AS 90055 – you need to spend 30 minutes to complete this paper and write at least 250 words. For this standard you need to write about TWO short texts or TWO poems. You need to write about both the short texts in one essay.

Visual Texts (1.5) AS 90056 – you need to spend 30 minutes to complete this paper and write at least 250 words. Every one of you will be writing about a film that you studied in class this year. So that is either Heavenly Creatures or October Sky.

Close Reading (1.6) AS 90057 – This may be the last standard mentioned but it is still important. You need to spend 50 minutes to complete this paper. You will read four unfamiliar texts and they will be:

Prose– a written text, maybe an extract from a short story or novel.

Poetry– a NZ poem

Visual-an advertisement or a poster where you have to comment on verbal and visual features.

Oral– an extract from a speech or maybe a transcript from a television show.

What is in the exam?

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To make sure that everyone is clear about the exam content I will post details, level by level, class by class. First up is English 102.

The exam is three hours long. You will sit four papers, details below:

Extended Texts (1.3) AS 90054 – you need to spend 30 minutes to complete this paper and write at least 250 words. Every one of you will be writing about a novel-a novel I hasten to add that you studied in class. Students in 102 either read The Whole of the Moon or they read Letters from the Inside.

Short Texts (1.4) AS 90055 – you need to spend 30 minutes to complete this paper and write at least 250 words. For this standard you need to write about TWO short texts (yes, in the same essay!). All of you will be writing about the short stories you studied this year.

Visual Texts (1.5) AS 90056 – you need to spend 30 minutes to complete this paper and write at least 250 words. Every one of you will be writing about a film that you studied in class this year. So that is either October Sky, Edward Scissorhands or School Ties.

Close Reading (1.6) AS 90057 – This may be last but it is very important. You need to spend 50 minutes to complete this paper. You will read four unfamiliar texts and they will be:

Prose– a written text, maybe an extract from a short story or novel.

Poetry– a NZ poem.

Visual-an advertisement or a poster where you have to comment on verbal and visual features.

Oral– an extract from a speech or maybe a transcript from a television show.

Remember to keep revising and check out moodle and the English Faculty wikis for help. As we get closer to exam time I will post helpful hints for those of you who want those good grades. In other words – all of you!

Direction Words in Level Two NCEA Essay Questions

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Most essay questions are not presented in the form of a question. Instead, they are often presented as a statement that includes a direction word. The direction word tells you what you should do when you write your answer to the item. Look for the direction word and be sure to do what it tells you to do.

Here are the direction words that are most frequently used in Level Two NCEA English exams. The meaning of each direction word is provided and is followed by an example of an essay question using that direction word. Get to know what each of these direction words tells you to do.

AnalyseAnalyse tells you to break something down into its parts and show how the parts relate to each other to make the whole.

‘Analyse how ONE or MORE minor character(s) helped you understand a main character.’

Contrast – Contrast tells you to show how two or more things are different.

‘For EACH of your studied texts, analyse how contrast helped the author develop an important idea.’

Describe – Describe tells you to present a full and detailed picture of something in words to include important characteristics and qualities.

‘Describe important symbols in the texts you have studied and analyse how the symbols helped develop important ideas.’

Explain – Explain tells you to provide facts and reasons to make something clear and understandable.

‘Explain and discuss in detail how the beginning and ending of your studied texts were important.’

I hope you noticed how important it is to be able to analyse texts in Level Two English. To analyse a text you need to be able to:

  • Discuss the specified aspects of a text asked for in the question
  • Give apt supporting details, with clear reference to the text/s studied
  • Write a clear, coherent essay
  • Show engagement with the texts studied.

I will not rote-learn my exam essays!

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I know that many of you memorise essays to use in your exams. This is not a good idea as excessive reliance on memorisation, or perhaps memorising the wrong things, can lead you astray in NCEA English where flexibility, unpredictability, and critical thinking are highly rewarded. The English Examiners try very hard to set essay questions that will stop students from ‘dumping’ pre-prepared essays into their exam answers. If the marker of your paper believes that you have done this you will be graded down.

So what is the answer?

1. Develop efficient question analysis.

You need to know exactly what the question is asking you to do. There is some great advice on how to do that on the University of Worchester site. It is really important to understand the requirements of the question so that you can write an essay with relevance to the question. If you memorise answers beforehand this tends to cut you out of this vital first step.

2. Work on writing relevant answers.

Use lots of questions for practice. You may get them from past papers, your teachers, or even make up your own. When you are sure exactly what a particular question requires, go through your notes, your texts, any material that you may have memorised and decide what main points will be needed to answer this question and no others. Note down those points. Think about any quotes, examples, and elaborations that you might use in developing each point. The next step is to write an introduction in the register and style appropriate to the task.  Look back at my previous posts on essay writing if you are not sure of what to do. Then skip the body of the essay and write a conclusion. This exercise can be done in five or ten minutes, and when frequently done with many different questions it makes your work very adaptable. Make sure that you do lots of these. Another technique is to write the full essay, not worrying about time, but just trying to get the ideas sequenced correctly. Then put it away, and take it out again a few days later. Now look at your answer again and decide what needs to be changed. You could also write the full essay in 40 or 50 minutes (For Levels Two and Three) to simulate exam conditions. You will need to be able to write a Level One essay in around 25 minutes. This is important as poor timing is often part of the problem, and the more automatic it becomes the better.

3. So what about memorisation?

Of course it is a very useful skill to possess. Just be careful what you choose to memorise. Useful things might include:

  • Quotations from the text you are studying, related texts, or critics. Always acknowledge them when you use them, and never use them just because you know them. There has to be a reason to use them.
  •  Basic facts that could prove useful. Again, never use them unless they really are relevant to the question.
  • Some carefully crafted passages of your own, argument or exposition for example, may be useful but there is a big danger. Anything you use has to fit neatly into the style and content of the answer you are writing.

Remember, you learn to write by writing, you improve by doing; you gain confidence by writing revision essays. Your teachers will be pleased to give feedback when you do this. If your teacher gives you the opportunity to revise, grab it! Don’t say: Is this assessed? Does it count? The answer to that is actually “Yes”. It will be assessed when you do the “real” task much more effectively as a result of this practice!

Thanks to Neil Whitford for lots of the material used in this post.

Writing an Exam Essay

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This post is aimed at Year 12 students.

In the school exam you will have to write essays on the texts that you have studied. To do this successfully there are some things that you must do:

  1. Demonstrate clear knowledge of the text studied and how it was constructed. To do that you must understand the elements that make up the text: characters, theme, setting, structure and style.
  2. Show that you have engaged with the text and that you have an appreciation of it. You must demonstrate that you have really thought about the text.
  3. Convey insightful thoughts about the text, don’t just regurgitate class notes.
  4. Integrate knowledge and understanding from beyond the text. Make clear connections within and beyond the text.
  5. Be analytical, not just in the conclusion of your essay.
  6. Show a wide knowledge of the text, you need to be able to draw across the text in your essay.

Wilfred Owen

A number of Year 12 English students are researching Wilfred Owen for their research assessment. Wilfred Owen (1893-1918), was a famous war poet. He served as a company commander in the Artist’s Rifles during World War I and was killed in France on Nov. 4, 1918, one week before the armistice. Owen’s poetic theme, the horror and pity of war, is set forth in strong verse that transfigured traditional metres and diction.

I have put some links in below to help students with their research.

Wilfred Owen Webquest – this site has video and website links. Have a good look at this one.

Wilfred Owen – Another site set up to help students. Well worth a look.

Information about Wilfred Owen – Biographical detail.

National Archives – has documentation relating to Owen’s war service.

The College Herald

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Are you a budding cartoonist, critic, artist, reporter, designer, writer or photographer? Get your work into New Zealand’s biggest daily paper with The College Herald.

They are looking to feature work from as wide a range of people as possible. All ages, skills and viewpoints are welcome. It could be something you did for a class assignment ages ago, or it could be something you’ve created specially for The College Herald.

They are looking for anything that says what you want to say.

  • Articles
  • Letters to the editor
  • Photographs
  • Cartoons
  • Interviews
  • Poetry
  • Music reviews
  • Film and TV reviews
  • Investigative journalism
  • Painting
  • Collages
  • Graphic design

Once you’ve found or created something you think is worth publishing, you’ll need to submit it to the editor. You can enter online, or print out, complete and mail the entry form provided. Remember to get a teacher to authorise your entry. Easy.

Get published and your work will be seen by hundreds of thousands of people around the country. What’s more, you’ll find that letting your thoughts and opinions out isn’t the only reward. Winning students will win either a digital camera or a Westfield voucher. Plus everyone who submits a piece of work will be in the weekly draw to win an iPod Nano – whether they are published or not.

Go to the link below:

The College Herald