The essay below is titled ‘New Zealanders do not know their history’. The essay is an example of Level One Formal Writing and it was written by a Year 11 student in exam conditions. Let me know what you think of it.
We profess to be New Zealanders, Kiwis, Antipodeans. But that is our nationality. What do we know of the history that has brought about the recognition our country deserves? We know the emblems used to symbolise our Nation-the kiwi, the fern, the koru and the tags-nuclear free, clean and green, multicultural-but we don’t know why.
What a shock to learn the Maori were here before the Europeans and that cannibalism was practiced amongst the warring tribes. How terrible to learn that Hone Heke cut down the British flagpole on numerous occasions-not terrible because he was being indifferent to the English, but because we were being taught that in Year 9, when we should have known it in our second year of primary school.
Perhaps New Zealanders do not know their history because it is not taught until an age when it is not compulsory anyway. It is not important to the Government that the history of this country is instilled at an early age so that college years can be spent studying things rather more important than basic information.
Perhaps our knowledge of our past is ignored because New Zealanders see it as history. It’s been. Gone. We can’t do anything about it. Why worry about it? Why indeed? Well, it may help to understand conflict ongoing today, such as Treaty of Waitangi land claim disputes. Or the history taught may give an insight into special dates noted during the year-such as Waitangi Day. Is it just another holiday, or is there a reason for the day off?
Christmas, Halloween, Labour Day, St Andrews day on November the 30th-why are we borrowing other countries history when we have our own? It may be that our history does not reach back far enough in time to be of any importance to some people, but what difference does that make? Is it any unique, any less true, than any other history?
Perhaps the history of other countries is more fascinating than our own, just because it is foreign, or is it fascinating because New Zealanders do not know their own history, it is still there. It always will be. It is as precious as our “clean-green”, “nuclear free” identity. And don’t forget-our history is our identity.